All Comments on 'The Screamer Ch. 10'

by Liquor69

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
losing track of who is who

u need to put some kind of cahracter list somewhere man. u got too many people i cant tell whos who

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

OK a couple of more chapters to go how come I think your going to not end the story and leave me hanging????

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

On the first page, you had multiple times of people discussing eating "deserts". Are you selling SAND-wiches?!

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