All Comments on 'The Sculptor Ch. 01'

I liked it very much! A good, balanced story - and a perfect enjoyment to read. Excelent dialogues, and no abuse of detail in sex descriptions. Just perfect.

Keep up the good work.

Your story lifted me to a new plateau...grin, I enjoyed your story and GOOD LUCK (~_~)

My art classes were never like this! Waiting for chapter 2.

Cantdog,

Chapter one is excellent! Full of pertinent details, character development and ambiance. The sex was hot! The story is dear to me. Bravo!

I have started reading chapter2

D&S

Excellent work C, very well constructed, sexy and hot. Look forward to reading more.

Very interesting cast of characters and well worked!

Brilliantly well done. Your ebb and flow was perfect and I am breathlessly awaiting time to read the rest of the series.

your fan,

v~

...why this is high in the lists, it deserves to be.The characters have a feel of reality to them and I like that it is open enough for there to be many future directions. I certainly will continue to read the series...

only one other thing...

"Bass players oughta be chained up somewhere," she said to herself."

My profile says I'm into ~light~ bondage Cant. Chains are heavy. * Bel picks up his bass and breaks into the theme from Barney Miller*

Yes truely amazing. I wish I had such a studio space to work in. And you captured the first time models actions perfectly. Eager yet slightly scared by the unknown yet sexually charged by the experience. Very true to life in that respect, at least that has been my own personel experience in first time models. but after they've done it a few times that special something gets lost and its hard to keep them from falling asleep.

Onto the next chapter....