All Comments on 'The Sculpture'

Nice set up, though things maybe moved a bit too fast. But once they got there, no complaints! Great stroke material.

One suggestion: shorter paragraphs. Huge text blocks can be hard to read, try to break them up more often.

Less detail than I prefer but still a good story.

I await your next entry.

Beautifully written. Would have liked if it hadn't been so rushed near the end, and it could have used a little more detail. But, very sexy, anyway!