All Comments on 'The Search is Over Ch. 02'

good series but when the seniors told her they were giving her a curfew why didn't she say i need to think about this and then call her brother and ask if she could move in with him then go and tell the seniors that if they gave her a curfew she would have no choice but to leave and that she already had a place that she could stay and didn't need thier bullshit and to let her know thier desision then turn and go to her roomit would have been more interesting

Even better than the last. If you ever write a book, I'm definatly buying.

But I think you need to develop it into a sibling love story. It's good as it stands, but I think, in this case, more would be better.

i have to be honest, im not a fan of bi-sexuality so that really made her look like she was only doing it all to get sexual satisfaction, including when it was with her brother. i think that this storyline has so much potential to be a sibling love story, but like deep love. if im honest i would prefer an exclusive sibling relationship between the two of them, but your the author. dont get me wrong, i did enjoy reading this story, its just my take on it and what i would prefer to see. keep writing please.

Please tell us you're going to write some more of this wonderful story. You have a great talent for writing.

May we please have some more?

almost three years and no chapter three i guess we wasted our time reading this. typical of writers on this site they can only start a story and don't have the brains to finish them. total waste of my time and the sites space. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND SOME RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND FINISH WHAT YOU START OR DON'T POST AT ALL!!!!!

DBRS

well why cant this site do like another and least a story as incomplete or inactive

continue this saga

Why end it there wanting more their love only just beginning. More please

You haven't finished this one either !

You are a serial non-finisher - but why ?

You think up some great story lines, draw the reader in to the story - and then just leave it unfinished - every time !

WHY ?

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So she gives her virginity to her brother then goes and has sex with her female roommate. Wow that is really original. Typical of a porno script. Glad this is not finished cause its garbage. Also like how she keeps her lesbian sexual experience from someone she truly "loves." She is a keeper probably will be fucking his friends after awhile.

Why did you stop writing?