All Comments on 'The Seattle Boy Ch. 02'

I get why they fell into bed right away, I just don't get why you chose to end the chapter there. The chapter should end at a natural point in the story, not just when you get tired of typing. At any rate, I really enjoy what you've written so far and look forward to the next installment.

Interesting story, but frustrating in where the chapters end. No discussion about what happened, or anything but raw animal sex between them when he finally realizes who she is and he is reasonably sober. Sounds like it should end in another train wreck, but will keep reading.

I've read the previous comments and I actually enjoy the way you are writing the story. Maybe because I can relate to it. I think the way you end your chapters are sexually frustrating because of all the build up and then you cut us off. Extremely teasing, quite rude actually...but very amusing at the same time. :) The characters are complex and obviously have too much history. Sometimes it's easier to just shut up and fuck, after all, it is so much easier to talk to your partner after all the hot sex. (; great read. It's sunny here by the way, in Seattle... It'll probably only last for 5 mins though. Haha

I love the story and can't wait til the next chapter I hope it's soon