All Comments on 'The Seduction'

WOW! Wish I had a sister like you! *S* Loved your descriptions and language. Just as I'd like to hear it from my lover. Thanks.

i would like to read more of your storys fining them very erotic indeed keep writing you are very good at it

Yes Babe, siblings should fuck and it is best with each other. This story is a good example of how much fun it is to fuck and suck your brother/sister. And you have writen a wonderful story about it. It made my fucking prick hot and hard very quickly. John p

I loved it. Thanks for sharing your tale.

What Hot, Hot, stories. I Wish my brothers would take care of me like that. Yummy!

Nothing quite like brothers and sisters making each other happy!

this story was so hot i loved it

This story made my pussy throb. I would love to be Alan's sister.

Wow! Loved this story! Can't wait to read more! Made me very hot.

Horrible writing. Do adults actually talk like that?

You know, its a great story. But you tell it badly. You should really be a better student of human behaviour and listen to people speak to each other. How did YOU talk to your lover the first time you were together. Forget for a moment that you are writing about siblings. And you need to be more descriptive. What does her pussy look like. Contrary to popular myth, all pussies do NOT look alike. What makes her special? Take your story and be more real and less fantasy. How do they really talk? How do they really act? Would she really half undress and masturbate in front of her brother thinking it would seduce him? A woman who had played the 'touch me' game with her brothers could easily seduce them if she had the confidence in herself. You tell the story like you want to get it over and just get to the fuck at the end.

The seduction of this sibling was hot. Love to see how the other sibling gets seduced.