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All Comments on 'The Seduction of Louise Ch. 12'

by Jaymie_dee

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eric shawn listoeric shawn listoalmost 20 years ago
Superb!

Wonderful! Sweet! The sense of innnocence in Louise is so amazing. Even as she gets more adventurous in her sexual awakening, it's her innocence that we hang onto.

Great!

esl

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Excellent story line- keep up the good work

Maybe try something daring, such as bringing some of the members of the band into this courtship. Since she has awakened sexually, it might be time for others to get involved with Louise.

eric shawn listoeric shawn listoalmost 20 years ago
Thinking they miss the point.

Louise is the best character ever to grace this site. She doesn't need to mess with anyone else.

esl

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Fantastic

Don't change a thing. THe story is warm, loving and incredibly erotic.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 4 years ago

I agree with the other two commenters. I think if you introduced someone else into their love life, that would have ruined the story as Louise just doesn't seem to be that type of woman. Five stars!!

jkthekatjkthekatover 4 years ago
always 5 stars *****

*****

RangeExpanderRangeExpanderabout 4 years ago

Juicy as ever thanks!

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