All Comments on 'The Sentinel Ch. 01'

great story so far like plot. hope following chapters are as good.

I can't wait to see where you take this. This looks to be one of those hard-to-find gems in the mass of Lit submissions.

I too have been in the emotional drama of chat...your story was great! hope to read more.

Jack should have sued the police and took them to the cleaners the rookie that shot jack should have been kicked off the force and what happened to the killer that killed his woman did they get him did the police pay for jacks injuries i would have loved to been the lawyer that took jacks case because i would have taken them to the cleaners for everything.

Atlanta,Ga

Terrific start, full of suspense and excellent writing. I can already tell that Mark is quite a class act, and Juan is going to be a great friend and character.