All Comments on 'The Serpent Tongue'

Erotic and kinky.

At first I wanted him to completely win her over making her his slut, but I like what the author has given us to read even better.

Perhaps if there is another chapter, he will get to fill her up with his sperm, and become a regular lover to her.

I hope to see more soon.

Thanks for the read

thanks that was an enjoyable read - part 2?