All Comments on 'Tori and Liam'

I would love to hear any feedback you can give me on this since it is a part of a larger story in the works. Hopefully.

your writing and the set-up. I hope there is more. I am confused over what roles Troy and Liam play. I think Troy is the fiancé -- but the introduction of Liam was abrupt and without explanation. What is The Sex Club? I hope there's clarification in the next chapter. You can the writing gift, and got the five from me. Take care now....

typo -- should have read you have the writing gift.

Thanks so much for your opinion. It was just a scene that spoke to me and you"re right it's confusing because it ended up in the middle of a longer story. All will be explained.