All Comments on 'The Sexiest Kiss'

Well Max, true to your request: I am posting. You're right you need an editor. I can do the words like there, their and they're but the mechanics run-on sentences, dangling participles..... that's out of my perview. The 5 stars were for content and intent. Thank you.

Don't much care if it says there or their or thar as long as I kin read a good stori because thats whats countses .! lol Very good story matter of fact.!! 100% A+

this is one of my favorite stories

So I thought the first half was really cute and well done, some typos and a little janky at times but cute, the second half I thought was pretty... Meh. Celeste comes off extremely manipulative and kinda gross. She manipulates him into coming to a sexual party by lying to him?

That's a pretty massive red flag imo. Honestly would have preferred a more organic approach and then maybe the party after, kinda ruined the whole thing for me.