by Sirens_Cry
I beg you, please don't stop here! There must be more to this story.
I truly loved your tale. Keep it up.
I loved this series, though I feel that there is more to this story. The aftermath? Is Donovan going to seek his revenge? Do the Elven people forgive the humans? Does Elwyn eventually fall pregnant? A son? Their heir - a target for Donovan? Ooooh the list is endless. I was gripped and you wrote it so well. I'll keep checking back just in case!!!
A very well told story, very entertaining, and well thought out. The ending was perfect, and I could actually see the credits roll in my mind as if it was a movie, while finishing the last paragraph. Brilliant.
Thank you author for your time and efforts. This was a wonderful tale.
This story was epic! I could wish for more, which is a LOT coming from me. Bravo! Job well done! Can't wait to see more from you.
I would like to know if she could have his child because we all know he deserve to have one.
Loved it! Thanks for a great read. Could there be a sequel? .....best regards.....Steve
...I just want to probably make you laugh by saying that what I've read so far is probably one of the most beautiful stories on this or any site I've read in, thank you
Well what a letdown. A great and detailed story, however the ending was a quick “ and they all lived happily ever after”
Don’t bother with this one.
IM READ ALL 7 CHAPTERS IN 1 SITTING. WELL WRITTEN, HELD MY ATTENTION THE WHOLE TIME. I ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH. I WAS HOPING FOR A QUICK EPILOGUE, SO WE COULD PEAK INTO THEIR FUTURE...DID THEY MARRY...HAVE CHIDREN..... ADOPT CHILDREN, ETC.