All Comments on 'The Shower'

I always enjoying seeing a woman pleasurung herself. There's almost nothing as sexy and erotic.

Great visual!!

thanks.

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I gave you a 5 vote for your effort.

very erotic indeed ....had me wishing I was watching you in that shower ....inviting !!

. . . that my stories have had that effect on the women who read them. Thanks for the beautifully sensuous images. Very erotic.

I read your words of bathroom steam

With my eyes so bright they gleam

I slipped inside for slippery fun

Bodies press now do not run

Lovely breasts so ripe to pick

Soapy round and nicely slick

Wet soft lips that touch and move

Gorgeous one you've found your groove

Mouths that open tongues find joy

Oh yes you are a sexy toy

Shower spray and down between

Fingers touch and pull and preen

Long and hard I cannot stand

One second more with you at hand

I pull you close and fill you up

Drink with me from natures cup

Move and plunge beneath the fall

Ride with me and head my call

A sweet release you fill my need

Thank you gal my will you feed

I think you know who wrote this for you. xoxoxo