by The_Traveling_Wife
Well written short story that would be more appropriately placed in "Non-Erotic," "Romance," or "Erotic Couplings."
A good scene, but not very well written. Read some other shower scene stories on this site and you'll see what I mean.
This is a TLW story! Not the first (or best) one in the LW section.
I do not understand 'oxymoron' as PistolPete seems to want to use it for Room's statement! I see NOTHING in that statement which could be possibly be interpreted to be oxymoronic!
3*
It was a nice little story, but to me it wasn't erotic at all. Where was the hot sex,loud moaning????