All Comments on 'The Shy One Ch. 01'

Good sex, well told. Putting yourself in Brads' place can be nothing but painful,and theres nothing wrong with being shy, but all he can do here is walk away.

yep. i agree with the other poster. it is a painful experience for Brad, if he is indeed 'in love' with his sister. i suppose i have yet to find out if it is 'love,' so i am waiting for him to get jealous too if that is the case. :D

Being shy is one of the hardest things to overcome,I hope that the brother and sister get a chance to experience the love that they could have........Rich

The little details are great; making these characters dynamic and interesting. Heh, of course it took me several paragraphs to realize just who Lisa -was-, but that was a nice tease, too.

Nice erotic start to the story - great buildup for the action that is certain to follow. You have us all at edge of our seats

Nice erotic start to the story - great buildup for the action that is certain to follow. You have us all at edge of our seats

Nice erotic start to the story - great buildup for the action that is certain to follow. You have us all at edge of our seats

I loved your mouse book. Absolutely astounding. And even enlightening. I'm eager to see where this goes man!! Good going! I find myself at this horrible in between emotion of jealousy and being utterly turned on.

don't know why he was there in the first place and why he didn't just leave. kind of dumb to just hang around and be tortured like that.

Meh. Nice start, sort of, but uncool to stop it at this point.