All Comments on 'The Sick Day Ch. 02'

Please continue. Looking forward to the next chapter.

is she pregnant?

Smegma? Not sexy.

Sickly-sweet? Ew.

It would have been super hot with a few better word choices.

I thought it was incredibly hot. It wasn't the same old story, which was nice. as you brought in some new details. Keep writing.

Did she get pregnant? This is raw, animalistic, and natural sex in its finest!

they were both hot! i thought the first one with the father as the protagonist was enough to make me... drool, but this was unbelievable, she probably wont be preg since he came outside her huh? =) but she shoul come back... take it all the way

You should NEVER use the word Smegma in a story - let alone an erotic one

That said .. please continue :)