All Comments on 'The Sins of Aunt Susan Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
great start

amen

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
When will we read more?

When will we read more?

BUICK GSBUICK GSover 18 years ago
GREAT START!

NOT YOUR AVERAGE STORY HOPE NEXT CHAPTER IS ABOUT TO POST. WILL BE ON THE LOOKOUT FOR IT.

eronoireeronoireover 18 years agoAuthor
From the author--next chapter will be up soon

It has been submitted and should be up within a week.

Thanks to everyone for all the positive feedback!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Sensually charged and very arousing!

Nice work! Awaiting chapter two!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Susan 01

Yep - more in 02!

Lukas

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
loved chapter 1

That was really hot! Loved the way you built it up before getting into the hot and heavy part. I shot a load when he came in his aunt's mouth. I had a sexual experience with my own aunt, although she was older than your aunt character and I was much younger than the nephew. Thanks for bringing back pleasant memories!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Strange change in attitudes

I didn't exactly like how when the nephew figured out what the aunt was doing he just shouted at her, then he grabbed her and put her against the wall! He could have approached it better than that.

rightbankrightbankover 10 years ago
compassion? gratitude?

No, instead he becomes angry and exhibits rage. So much for actually caring.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Awesome

He should've fucked her harder in her pussy or ass

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
lost me

you lost me in the first sentence Boulder to Denver is a 30-40 min trip o RTD not Greyhound

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

'Gave you a 4; would have been a 5, But: His respondences to her advances were weird and unnatural. A real young man would have been all over her like a big dog. Yes, that may thwart what you have lined up, but that's when maybe you should change their reactions a bit. But it's very hot, keep it going.

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