All Comments on 'The Sister Dares'

Very erotic and well written. Loved peeking into the sexual life of the rich and famous, with sensual incest. Very nice. I look forward to more games between them.

I loved your story up to the point when he fucked her ass . If he really loved his sister he would have been happy to wait till a much later encounter to suggest it . This could be a good series later including her daughters .Don't spoil it by taking out the affection and making it all lust .

i loved it. hope for more, get her daughters in on the game to!

Iwas playing with nt younger sister in the grounds of a pub while our parents were inside ,we were in a secluded part and as i eased her panties -------,sorry nearly got carried away ,loved this exellent tale.By the way the opening sentance is true,maybe one day I will write an erotic true story.For the time being,I will confine my activities to reading lovely stories like this.

Ihad a lovely incestuous relationship with my sister ,I never han anal with her or for that matter even thought about it.Its the anal bit that spoils this otherwise great story.

when he walked into her bedroom she was wearing a black bra and panties then in the hotel she was wearing red bra and panties, but othere than that it was a hot story

I mean seriously, why is it that anal is so often the end? It's not like normal intercourse wouldn't be great for people in this instance.

turn off--It's where I quit reading

The story was going good, but in my opinion, you totally made the truth or dare WAY too quick. From like 5 lines they were totally cool, to the next five and they were off on a magical fantasy.

Then again im a stickler for lots of details. I think your story is good. Just don't be shy about descriptiveness. Anyways, I would love to read more!

Keep it up,

Your northern neighbor

Fantastic start. Going to read the rest in the series right now!

To soon in the story for anal sex.....was good till that point.

below average