All Comments on 'The Sitter'

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Great little stroke story. One of the best I've read in a long time!

Great story, but don't cheat the old man out of his orgasm. Very nice fantasy here, did you actually live it?

What happens next?! Pleeeease finish

This was enough for a 5 from me, and I don't generally give those out. That said, the wife was barely mentioned...is she cheating on Griff? Will the sitter eventually take her place? Will Katie become pregnant...Griff's new wife...Will they move...Will they stay...what will Katie's parents say.... This tome has a plethora of loose ends, and all of us here at Literotica are trusting you to successfully tie them together, leaving not even one untied. Then your next story will also get a 5 from me. Good writing!

Great Story

Thanks for the kind words... I did delete one comment criticizing my grammar, but only because no specifics were given. I want to keep getting better, but please help me do so with specific suggestions, not 'this could've been written by a 7 year old'. As for the rest of you, what do you think should happen next?

this is one of the best stories on here, hands down. perfect. it grabs you and keeps you hanging onto every paragraph. looking forward to whatever comes next, whether it's a simple closer or a longer narrative series.

I'm waiting for the next part - GREAT story.

I'd love to see a couple of chapters of this story with the same writing style. Had me playing for a while and even typing this is hard because somehow my hands slid down my panties.

Definitely got me reaching for my pussy. Thank you

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I would like to have a baby sitter that one

...from a certain candy bar of old, this was "Indescribably Delicious".

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really liked it