All Comments on 'The Sleepover'

There have been many affairs that started just like this. You did a great job of capturing all the feelings . . . the repressed longing . . . the secret touching and teasing . . . months or even years of foreplay leading up to the one magical experience. What comes next is not usually very much fun. I hope you'll write a chapter two and let us know what happens to the three characters.

i really enjoyed the story - both sexy and romantic - jim s. in mimi

i would love to see more if your work awesome job plz don't stop writing. luvs ya

I think you've done an excellent job here. Your sexual descriptions are top rate, something most of the writers here have difficulty achieving.

I note this is your only submission and that's too bad. Our loss, but I do hope you still write something somewhere.

A fellow author, Paris Waterman AKA GrouchoJim