All Comments on 'The Slow Dance'

by minnie_fae

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TalkSexyToMe2029TalkSexyToMe2029over 2 years ago

Incredibly hot. Pictured perfectly the non verbal communication going on between people attracted to each other.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
PlEASE CONTINUE !

I keep comig back and rereading the same chapters but I would love new ones (:

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Brilliant!

This story was an incredibly good read. Slow burn stories are a rarity these days

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wonderful!

I was pleasantly surprised by this chapter, as these days "slow burn" stories are becoming increasingly rare. Well done, please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
That was absolutely lovely

Please do continue it! <3

elisebeeelisebeeabout 10 years ago
Awesome

And flawlessly edited. A pleasure to read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

That was..magical. More please!

TheTallDarkTruthTheTallDarkTruthabout 10 years ago
Intense!

This is gorgeous writing! I absolutely can't wait for more!!

Whispering_ChrisWhispering_Chrisabout 10 years ago
More please.

Love it, looking forward to more.

minnie_faeminnie_faeabout 10 years agoAuthor
:D

Thanks so much for the feedback! I'm happy to say that the second chapter is already nearly completed :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Oh yes

Please more I would love to read this !!!!

MaynessMaynessabout 10 years ago

Great start, please, please continue!

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