All Comments on 'The Small And Large Of It'
by suzie3w
- 12 Comments
Anonymousover 10 years agoMany women regret they did not have an experience with a guy like Nate before they married a guy like Kyle. Often they realize too late and remain unsatisfied for family reasons.
Anonymousover 10 years agoThe story itself wasn't bad but the writing was hit and miss. There was overuse of terms like 'and I realized' which really slow the narrative down. Nice try and keep writing because that's the only way you can improve.
felixcesarover 10 years agoIt.s a well told story and seems like an honest account from a young woman's point of view. One review claimed the language repetitive but that is the nature of sex,would be a great downer if a great soliloquy was composed during sex
CuckoldGuyover 10 years agoGreat account of a girls first few times. I never know what a woman is thinking at those times but you made it so perfectly clear. Beautiful writing.
Oleguyabout 10 years agoDeserves more than the measly 5* this system dictates.
I gotta agree with that other commentator in that you really told me a lot of what it all means for a woman.
JWrenalmost 10 years agoAh, comparisons: little and large, wham-bam and generous foreplay. A young woman's first steps into the sexual unknown are graphically illustrated. Her thoughts and writings are teaching aides for young men. In these two instances, experience plays the winning role. We all have to start and learn somewhere and Suzie's account clearly indicates her preference: big and caring.
theMasterBaiterabout 3 years agoHurt by a small cock, but a big cock, better used, brings joy and O's. Well done. The writing would benefit from some editing; let me know if you want an editor for your next story.
