All Comments on 'The Sniper'

Nice but needs a sequel ;)

you have been more careful with your spellings and grammar.

Good, but too short~!

More please.

Need more

The sting of battle - an enemy combatant and a Nurse share a few hours as they attempt to enjoy a short interlude of passion. Well Written! Very realistic! Good Read!

That story is one of the best adult action sex stories I've read here at Lit recently. Blending in a good line of drama and the interaction of two total strangers in unlikely arena makes the next chapter waited for.

Good work!

I can't believe the readers that thought this was an excellent story. In the American army snipers are highly trained and emphasis is placed on making sure you shoot only select targets. This incompetent shoots a Red Cross worker,and , to add insult to injury , a nurse who is working on saving one of his comrads. He then adopts a" Oh what the hell" attitude and go about his killing business. Later on , your hero ,being a nice fellow, dumps said nurse in his truck and hauls her away. Once he gets her to safety , he then rapes her. after which she settles back and enjoys it. Wow, if this is excellent I would hate to read a bad story. the Ct. Yankee

i liked the story very much. you should re edit it i agree. there were a few parts that i had trouble with. but the story is very interesting. i hope you continue on with it.

if it didn't suspiciously remind of this story

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=223792

by the way, sebastian is not a russian name at all

I have always loved this story. I had been offline for over a year and just found your story again.

It is still as awesome as the first time I read it!

Damn it I meant to give you 5 stars not 4, sorry!