All Comments on 'The Spider and the Fly'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Spontaneous

Loved the way the older woman came on to the guy

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Could do better...

""Loved the way the older woman came on to the guy""

Strange, that's what I hated about it!! It was all too quick, no seduction whatsoever. A fumbling teenage fantasy that a woman will simply open her legs because someone looks at her. A bit more time spent on the woman getting to know him, and seducing him properly would have lead to an erotic story, rather than a simple wank fest...

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