by wildfern
This story was great, totally wroth reading. I will admit a tear came to my eye when i though alanna was going to die. Great job, hope you make a part 2.
I really have to say how much I liked that story!
In the beginning I had a few doubts as it began with a kind-of forced introduction, with the weird characters of the old-pair - that only really make sense after a little while - screwing ones brain.
I for one, could lividly imagin her distress in understanding as the story unfolds together with her understanding of the events happening to and around her.
Arg. The cat inside - maybe would've like a bit more of a deeper character there, but thats just my personal taste.
As to everything else... nice dark one ... uh so 'oily' ...
and I certainly enjoyed their feral love-making *g*
Can one hope for a continuation of the story?
Cheers
-Shaya