All Comments on 'The Spirit of the Cat'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wow

that was a long syory! but worth it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Bravo

This story was great, totally wroth reading. I will admit a tear came to my eye when i though alanna was going to die. Great job, hope you make a part 2.

ShayanielShayanielover 16 years ago
Loved it!

I really have to say how much I liked that story!

In the beginning I had a few doubts as it began with a kind-of forced introduction, with the weird characters of the old-pair - that only really make sense after a little while - screwing ones brain.

I for one, could lividly imagin her distress in understanding as the story unfolds together with her understanding of the events happening to and around her.

Arg. The cat inside - maybe would've like a bit more of a deeper character there, but thats just my personal taste.

As to everything else... nice dark one ... uh so 'oily' ...

and I certainly enjoyed their feral love-making *g*

Can one hope for a continuation of the story?

Cheers

-Shaya

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
WOW

Fantastic. Amazing writing. Keep it up!

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