by soroborn
is this a cloudy romance, tune in again. TK U MLJ LV NV
.........but it would have been good to have a notice that there would be more chapters to follow.
Otherwise, this chapter falls into the category of "improbable, but thoroughly entertaining".
Five-star, based upon expectations of future writing.
Thanks for the feedback - I had a 'Doh!' moment when I realised I'd forgotten to add 'Ch.01' to the title of the first piece.