by PerilEyes
Really nicely done. The action was very well done. And the idea that something mysterious was going on added to a really nice pay off at the end. You have four very interesting, pleasant characters. Nice job.
if only
you had not missed out words then maybe I would have read the whole story
Thanks litfan for the kind words. If at least one person got a kick out of it I'm happy.
And Mr. Anonymous, missing words is a bad habit of mine, but I was good with it this time. Pray tell me where I erred.
A delightful exercise in exhibition! Two sexy couples, some friendly competition and a benign kinky rich guy's gift to humanity! Another highly enjoyable entry
Thanks for reading my work again. Your comments mean alot :)