All Comments on 'The Step'

Would love to read more of your work. I have place you on my favorites.

p.s.

small typo

"Who am I, Tess?"

"My daddy. Your my daddy," I sighed.

should be:

"Who am I, Tess?"

"My daddy. You're my daddy," I sighed.

I see from your profile that you have more stories and I hope you elect to post some or all of them here. Like your other commenter, I too will favorite you so I can keep up with what I hope will be further postings.

As for this story, it is wonderful. I enjoyed how well you delivered the story, the patience in letting it evolve and the style of your writing all come together to make a delightful, believable piece or erotica. So accept a 5 star rating and a wish for more postings. Thank you - Kevin

What is the matter with Amazon? I thought all Bezos wants to do is make money and your stories will sell. I agree with the commentator who corrected your grammar in one sentence. I think I noticed a couple of other typo-type errors you could correct with another reading. Small things but they loom more important for a writer with real ability like you. So I hope you will treat us with your other stories, Katrina. You have real talent. By the way there are other sites you might publish on, like Excessica. Maybe you have already checked them out.

Don't like our Missouri weather? Great story by the way.

Loved the story. The right amount of incestuous debauchery and submissive desire without overdoing it at all.

She hasn't found the right one because HE'S the right one. He seriously needs to stop thinking he knows what's best for her in this because he got it so wrong. I feel bad for her. I really hope he stops being a flaming idiot and goes to her.

There is no closure at all.