All Comments on 'The Stepford Children'

by MagicWand

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Man RayMan Rayover 18 years ago
I think..

I think we've all had this fantasy while watching `that` film so well done for putting it down on paper for us!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Bam

Nail on the head. Awesome story. The ending was kind of rushed, I think that you should take the time to write a sequel. I would read it twice.

KrraaazzzzyyyyyKrraaazzzzyyyyyover 18 years ago
Well done! I'll be watching for more...

Magic Wand... I know you're a fan of my stories, and now I'm your fan, too! Well, done! I like the way the storyline is going... I think I picked up on something too, but don't want to spoil it for the other readers. I'll be curious to see if I was right.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Best way of making the next chapter

It’s good but it needs more what they do is go to maximum range of the Watch and call all of the females that have been given the programming at first but but his wife and daughter but have a spy in town but then later they will take his family as the last of them

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