All Comments on 'The Stormy Night'

So well written and so believable, loved it.

"1" star because no "0" stars.

Well developed characters and thoroughly enjoyable story.

Excellent story. Really loved it.

U r truly talented...... Waiting to see more of ur stories......

Rings so true!! The setting and the storm very real! I love the touch of innocence...keep going touchmate!!!

No incest in the story... may be wrong posting?

Such a lovely story.. gentle yet arousing..and very well written too..Thanks

excellent in fact i feel it really happened if not to you somebody you knew intimately.

i loved it, but i wanted it to end where jaya conceives

Very engrossing story. I enjoyed it thoroughly

WAITING FOR A STORMY NIGHT AND FOR MOHAN TO KNOCK AT MY DOOR!!!!!!!!

I AM RINA, SOUTHINDIAN HOUSEWIFE.

rinakrishna3@yahoo.co.in

Very horny story... I think you are a professional writer,.. I an eager to learn writing skills from you... Rare to see authors like u in Chennai.. Keep it up

Wow Touchmate, what a lovely storm you faced ? Certain parts of story are truely touching. Moreover, I think you are capable of creating not just good erotica but also good piece of literature.

After reading the story.. a thought occurs that all along the lady was trying to have a baby in her womb....and uses the situation to her advantage....there is no guilt....she did it in order to fulfill her cherished wish to become a mother.

Couldn't stop masturbating.

Great story very well told

My hard on lasted from the moment he first sucked her tits till he left

Thank you. It was a lovely change to the "wham, bang, thank you Mam".

Beautifully narrated. It's a fantasy but very much close to real life incidents of my friend. his long time affair with his married neighbor resulted in pregnancy three times and nobody suspects a thing.

The story reminds me my first woman, her name was also jaya

While graduating I used to stay at Chennai with my distant uncle’s family, jaya is the daughter-in-law of my uncle and sister in law of mine

Jaya’s husband was a bank employee and posted at a town about 100 km away from there so he was able to stay with us in weekends only.

At the age of twenty six her face resembles to bhanupriya (a famous malyali film actor in 90s} with well proportionate figure. She was also very loving in behaviour towards me so we become good friends in a short time

Almost every afternoon she used to come to my room after finishing her daily chores, I have a big collection of magazines, novels etc in my cupboard and she used to borrow them

There was some porn magazines and sex manuals were also there in the lower segment of cupboard, I always keep them carefully hidden because sometimes jaya herself open the cupboard to search the magazines of her choice. Within half and a month we become very close to each other, sometimes teasing and flirting too. As time spent, I came to know that there was an extremely naughty and luscious woman inside the innocent looking housewife. there was some double meaning talks exchanges between us on a few occasions, as a young man with high libido, I enjoyed her behaviour a lot, sometimes feel very strong desire to have sex with jaya and masturbate to relax myself

One afternoon when nobody at home except jaya and me, she came to my room but there was a big surprise for me, she was not dressed in a sari as usual but in a short flimsy nighty

she looks like a fashion model at this moment. as our eyes met, I noticed that she was not wearing a brassiere inside because her boobs shaking freely with her foot movement, within seconds my penis become fully erect and made me very uncomfortable inside my trouser, like a hypnotised male I quickly moved forward and grope her waist with my both hands and romantically said, ‘I love u jaya, if u were not married, we can...I mean..we...but before I completed my sentence, she made a shocking attempt by putting her both arms around my neck and a more shocking reply from her, ‘so what? may be we can’t marry but still we can make a baby of ours!!.....hearing that i almost ejaculated in my trouser!! within seconds we both become naked as the day we were born and kissing and fondling each other’s organs hungrily.

in the next two days we remain naked most of the time fucked again and again like a honeymoon couple.