All Comments on 'The Story of Jack and Pia'

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OverthefallsOverthefallsover 10 years ago
Gotta get up

Need to pee and eat - then back to bed. Nice story.

Johnny0432Johnny0432almost 7 years ago
romance?

NOT! but an ok Erotic Coupling story...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
If there are

more than 5 grammar errors in the first two paragraphs, I stop reading.

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