by Midday_Crisis
One should NEVER use petroleum jelly as a personal lubricant lubricant. Ah bee ya da bee ya da bee ya.........that's all folks!!!
Regards,
Paul
This story could have been continued. Then again it did reach a point where the future for this couple was obvious.
Shame you didn't continue this hot story. Really fun if daughter could have been included. But alas, I think that little minx Mary would have made him miserable in the long run, she's way to smart and head strong.
Really a fun read. Thank you!
Granted, the characters could have been developed a little more; but that would probably have made the story too long.
I do think the seduction could have been drawn out a little more, subtly.
As it happens, this story hit one of my buttons so I really did enjoy it.
You are one of the few who can develop a story line and continue it. Please continue this story.
My only wish is that there had been a scene describing what the two girls would get up to when they went out together.
Found myself rooting for them and wanting more...Very Nice! Just the right mix of a beautiful fantasy from an older guy's point of view; with the semi-crazy mix of contradictory impulses that define many, particularly young, women. Enjoyed it very Much!
Reality bites! Fantasy is much more fun.
Good story.
I don't normally read these kinds of stories but, I gave this one a chance. It was surprisingly good. I liked all three characters very much. Thanks for sharing an awesome story.
I usually get annoyed by manipulative bastards/bitches in stories but oddly i found Mary rather sweet in her own way. I would like it if this became a series.
Best of luck.