All Comments on 'The Student Ch. 01'

that was hot! can't wait for more!

No,No,no. You missed the whole point.

It was well hot.

I so hope you contine to write more of this story. I have seen many stories start then never finish. I'm curious to see how he wants to mold his student. I loved the part where he wants an educated woman as well as a sub.

You have a great story but you need to edit.

Is it waste or waist?

I'm usuall a stickler for spelling and grammar, I didn't even notice. I felt everything in this story. Not just the sex, but her nervousness and reluctance at entry and a surprise threesome. Her horror at the thought the money was for the sex. I loved that part. Your reaction and hers made me smile. It was exactly what I wld have done, and hopefully my Master wld do. Thanks for writing.