All Comments on 'The Stuff of Dreams'

I hope you are doing well and for me I continue to greatly enjoy your writing!

Alan

Enjoyable story, but really....she could hide 3 abortions from her father but it would have been impossible to hide being on bcp's from him?? Come on, man.

The writing and scenario got worse the more I read. So I stopped part way into page 2. If you must play with words do so in a crossword puzzle book.

Hmmmm - I like your writing in general, but this one leaves me wanting more. There needs to be another chapter, because this just ended with his introduction as her fiance............ and??? I also think they declared their love for each other much too quickly for a person moving in her social circles. Great that he is a skilled photographer, but that is a bit of a leap.

The circumstances of the incest between Father and Daughter (s) is passing strange. He forces himself on Stephanie, but the two younger daughters force themselves on him. Also something that strains credulity.

Where's the rest of the story?