All Comments on 'The Succubus Ch. 01'

.. but I'm feeling unfulfilled! More?

Thanks! It is but a start. It shall continue. And it shall only get better!

This is a fine start. Really like his POV, especially as he woke up. Only bone to pick....what about his poor dog?

My intent was the protagonist, unable to remember who he really is, is just making stuff up to try and gain sympathy. I have to revise that paragraph to help make that more clear.

I lost hours reading this story. It must have a hidden spell in the writing. I had a hard time writing this also. Hidden spell, don't read it. Warning.