All Comments on 'The Summer ABCs'

Among some other possible gaffs, am I mistaken, or did "John", dad's partner, become "Ken" for a while, and then become "John" again?

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to keep going but maybe from the parents side, there's a lot there to flesh out. Incest?

lesbian (for sure) swingers? Oh yeah why did they get divorced, was it John (Ken) fault? or did he find someone else in a swing. Or did he become Jealous of Ken's (John) big dick, or maybe he didn't want to do him?

anyway good luck....

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The Eagle gives 11/2 talons up!

Imogene certainly knew how to turn Bill on. It's interesting to read about girls who take the lead in a sexual relationship. They know what they want, and they're willing to grab it for themselves.

Enjoyed the story.

And my eyes got teary at the end again. Good story, even thought a few typos. Definitely a five star story.