All Comments on 'The Surprise'

Darlin' ... you almost made me want a cock ; )

I think your first venture was GREAT! Keep up the good work and write more soon.

Renee'

aka grllvr

now I'm suspicious... first story, so very hot, and you are so much inside a man's view... (;oP) but I'm as hot as hell... cus if you know how to please a man so well.... "be at the the airport in 1/2hr.." in the leathers and corset... don't forget the peach... and lets see what pleases you.... mmmmmmm

I wish I lived closer to the airport. This would be almost the perfect lunch, but it would only make me so much hungrier for more. I only wish you'd milked the poor guy into a near collapse before leaving him.

Now I have a new reason for wanting to win the lottery so that I can send out airplane tickets for trips to CA.

Knew you could do it....great story, great style and so you!! More please?

Wifey! pretty good for a first story....

when I get an email to meet someone at Heathrow airport, i'll know what i'm in for! ;)

Much Love

Your cyber ex-husband ;)

Funny, sexy, full of personality and good empathy. I give it two thumbs up!

wow, hk...

As I read this story, it was immediately shown to me that you know how to tell a story. The narrative tone works wonderfully... and for anyone who has made a "connection" here online, you weave for us the age old fantasy with a delicious twist to it.

But you know... as excited as I was reading this story, I'm even more excited thinking about what's going to come out of you next now that you've gotten your feet wet.

Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing this with us.

Holy Smack, Hershey! I've got to go...ummm...clean up.

whistle

Kiss, what an awesome story!! I can't believe it's your first and I'm already craving more. Like renee, I also was wishing I had a cock, giggles. I felt the excitment in your words....aroused me completly. I know, this user, will be having some very naughty dreams! *tight hugggggggs, & kisses* ;)

I gotta go finish my stories. You've inspired me! Dayum good story. Don't stop writing.

gina

Kenny read this to me and I loved it. You sure have a way with tellin a story sweetie.

This can be very addictive... I sure hope it is for you... let me know when you post again...

XOXOX Shay