All Comments on 'The Survivors Ch. 05'

You are writting a great fiction story. That has very deep charactors. Please write the chapters as fast as possible. I can hardly wait for the next one.

I just read the 5 chapters and now I can't wait for more.

This has the horror side of biological and bio-genetics research as it's base. Everything that people worry about when they consider any form of genetic altering or engineering. And as man becomes smarter the more horrorific the possibilities become.

This story certainly has a terrible 'plague' covering the country.

And the fight for survival is spellbinding.

Just waiting for more. Wondering how far the change will evolve,like Cindy, but even more? And how prevalent the forces are against him?

I hope you keep writing! It's nice to find a real piece of work that involves the good and bad. ! Great job!

Keep it up......I really like the story!

story series on Literotica! Excellent, vivid writing! Bravo!

your story series are great! keep them coming!

Great story, very deep characters and plot (Michael Crichton's The Andromeda Strain comes to my mind), and they develop! You are a Writer, not just pushing text out through the keyboard.

Thanks and continue with this, "Vacation .." and your Brother's "David & Lyssa".

John/Namizujs

Budapest

I am so impressed at (and envious of) the seeming ease with which you are propelling this story forward. Again, bard, I want to tell you that you are a gifted teller of stories. Is it too demanding to want more? ;)

Luck to you!

Yui

Have been following this story and enjoying it very much.

Also, have been waiting for the next chapter. We al know that the holiday season has everyone doscombobulated but we are sure hoping you can cotinue with the tale soon!!

KEEP WRITING, KEEP WRITING PLEASEEEEEEEEEE