All Comments on 'The Sweet Surprise'

For what it is it's pretty good. It's just a simple Dom/sub story. A husband who has insight to what his wife is thinking. Sure he slapped, her, no big deal. Nothing about it was abusive. They love and trust each other and took their relationship to a whole new level.

Way too many authors have foisted on we readers the possibility that a husband would extremely happy to share his wife openly with another man. I suppose this happens in reality but in my 70 years almost all of them single I have never known or heard of any husband would allow or treasure that. Basically these stories are fantasy and slightly perverse plus not at all interesting.

Not a bad little tale. The "slapping" lowered the erotic value to near zero for me. Using physical force is against my nature even in fiction. For others it is likely a real turn on.

@ Anon Unfortunatelly this sexual minority husbands are 2-3% of the husbands.

With 2 groups.

1. Bisexual (hid homo) husbands.

2. Porn addict hetero husbands.

The problem the most readers are sexual majority male people here, so I do not understand the owner of Literotica, why do not they divide LW into two hubs:

1. The sexual minority husband stories.

2. Cheating wives stories: with revenge, reconcilation, consequence and clueless husband stories.

I would be voluntary editor to divide the LW stories into two (2) hubs...............

Arguably it could have been a little longer and better-narrated, it was perhaps a bit contrived, but people claiming any particular kink is "sick in the head" or whatever, on an erotic fiction site, need to grow the fuck up. So it's not your personal preference. Get over it.

I liked it fine, next time a little more rising action and more slapping/coercion please.

What's a little violence if it gets your whore to screw your friend? What a total piece of shit.