All Comments on 'The Swim Lesson'

Please continue this story..

but with a very predictable outcome. It had gained on a more unexpected final situation. However still worth 5*.

Perfect English, perfect spelling, and a perfect story. This is one of the very few on this site that I will recommend to others as a perfect example. You not only have excellent writing skills but you have a gift for story telling. This was your first. Please continue to provide readers with a wonderful experience.

Good story. Had me hard for a while. Waiting for story 2.

A good Lesson One. Give Evan a bit of chest hair for that great chest he presses up against Dana!

Would love to see where this well written and arousing story is going. Thanx.

Wow! What an incredible first story!

I'll be eagerly looking for the next Swim Lesson

Very well written and hot. Had me hard and ready. Please write more - will be looking for your next story very shortly.

Oh my goodness this is one of the best stories i have read on here!!! i didnt want it to end!! thankyou!

Excellent. Keep them coming. :-)

Please write more! Amazing!