by techsan
I would believe 3 couples as we and 2 other couples do form a group.
I might believe 6-8 couples. After that the story begins to get ridiclious. 51 couples?
Too many characters to keep track of them. A real Mish Mash. Like reciting names as an exercise. techsan, you can do better than this.
I think the concept was interesting, and that it would be initiated by the women realistic (I think it would have to be that way, or the ladies would go nuclear!), but the sex was a little too "dry", not enough description, not hot enough. For the most part, this could have been in a mainstream novel.