All Comments on 'The Table by the Window'

Wonderful - did it for me

That was beautifully written erotica - tasteful yet dangerous, a yielding in the face of predatory assumptions. Very, very sexually exciting.

Look forward to reading your next submission.

Very nice build up of tension and sexual attraction in a short story.

Good use of descriptors - I could almost see them clearly. Extremely well done! Not sure how you did a buildup and a hot sex scene in such a short story but it worked!

amazingly well written, clean and crisp. i like the edge of bad boy in Abel and i appreciate the lack of any vulgarity. good as a stand alone story or the first of series (hint). i hope your other stories are as good.

beautiful! and now I want an Abel.

Definitely looking forward to more of your stories!

This is a terrific story. Very well written, compelling. Great sexual tension and build up, as well as really hot sex. I hope Abel and Sarah's story continues!

This is my favorite story on Literotica, period. I have read this about four times and it always turns me on. Also, i'm an artist and this story has inspired me so much. I have drawn Abel and Sarah (atleast how I imagine them) Thank you so much for this literary masterpiece.

~your anonymous fan <3