All Comments on 'The Taming of Andrea'

For the most part, a well thought out story. It does get a little time warped; one problem that I discovered toward the end that he is in bed with his wife and mentions Andrea to her; you then mention that it was Andrea (not his wife) who picks up the pate knife. I think that should be his wife instead. The finish is a bit stilted and doesn't really convince the reader of anything that might be possible down the road.

I thought the story was wonderful. There was more story than sex, but those are usually better, as long as the sex is not eliminated. A reader that commented mentioned the husband brought up the teacher/ex-lover. He did not, the wife brought it up, making the story much more realistic. I'd like to have that kind of love that the two characters share, and I do believe it's possible.

Thanks Bazza,

BE

What a great story! I'll have to see if you have written any others. Thanks so much!

I loved it. I was a little disapointed when Andrea left the scenario, and pleasantly surprised when she re-appeared. But it was handled well, I thought, perhaps as one commentator suggested, not 100 % believable, but I'll settle for the way you did it.

Child's play due to your skills and very much appreciated. Much could be made of the ending bed name confusion but it was trivial.<P>

Thanks Author - I / we look forward to more very well written entertainment when time permits.<P>

With Very High Regard

Very well written. Should pursue professional writing.

Sweetly done, a delicate, romantic treat. Thank you, author, it made my heart glad.

...always nice to read such a sweet and thoroughly enjoyable piece of lit. Quite believable, easy to overlook the few gramatical errors. Nicely done!

such a sweet story...even though i do wish andrea had ended up with someone who loved her no matter what =(

but life isnt perfect, so i guess this keeps the story realistic :)

loved the story. please write more! =)

Honestly, it was a decent story, until I hit this gross error...Isn't this supposed to be "Sophia", not "Andrea"?

In an instant Andrea reached for the pate knife, her other hand grabbing my semi erect cock and stretching it painfully to it maximum length. The knife, luckily blunt was run not so gently across the base. I laughed and rolled Andrea onto her back, then lowered my face to her pussy, ignoring her frantic efforts to get away. My face was quickly buried between those luscious shaven pussy lips, and her struggling soon evaporated as my tongue found her clitoris.

by the Andrea/Sophie pate knife. since the story had no prior subjective overlapping sensibilities to report as narrative. I'll take it as a fragment of an abandoned idea or as an unwelcome incursion. But whatever, the narrative is sensible and satisfying.

Great story! Slight name slip at the end—which I confess I didn’t even notice til I read other comments.

Sweet