by BengalTiger33
liking the story so far hope you make the next chapter longer
Many have been in this situation, it takes time to adjust. Some do make the best of the situation and really enjoy it.
Well written, no enormous sizes promoting believability, and so open ended. Might be the perfect set up for a narration change. Say over to Natalie's. Just a suggestion as it seems you've got a good handle on what's your story. Please, continue and thanks.
Very good start to a great series can't wait for the next chapter.
I love the sexual tension you have built up between Josh and Natalie in this first chapter. I am excited to read where this storyline goes!
NICE BUILD UP. SEXUAL TENSION IS FIRST-RATE. I LIKE THE STORYLINE SO FAR. HOPE IT CONTINUES.