by Panty_Licker
it was a great story..I'm sure that they must have more adventures to tell....Panties are such an excellent fetish to explore...I will be waiting for the next chapter eagerly.
Please continue. I am female, have a younger brother and I can relate to this story. Very exciting. Please do continue the story.
Let's have more--it ought be clear by now that you've got our tongues hangin' out!
Very hot and steamy, good concentration on the fetish angle, most authors do about two lines of the fetish and abandon it. You must write more...
This story reminded me very much of an experience just like it that I had with MY sister. She was an 18-year-old senior in high school and I was a scrawny sixth grader. We always tried to do it at least once a week, but it didn't feel right (for me) to have sex more than four or five times per month. Our love life went on for almost two years, until she had to go to a university 400 miles away from home.
i loved your story! i am heavy into that kind of thing. i love how female smell and how their panties smell. please wrote more.
Excellent, love stories like this except I think silky soft nylon panties are more arrousing
Forget the negative comments. This had me HOT from the first paragraph. I took off my own panties and smelled the sweet aroma of pussy juices....yes, delicious. My brothers have always liked to smell my panties, esp. when they are on me!!!!...Now to chapter 2, to let my cum flow into my white cotton panties...then of course, I will lick myself clean.
PPPPPP
Wish I could have done that with my sister - used to love sniffing her panties. Damn that's sexy!
I used to do this to my sister and it is very erotic and fulfilling
Good premise.
But needs more details. Needs more dialog.
Where he's rubbing his face on her panty-covered crotch, she could have asked him how he liked the smell? Did he think she'd taste as good as she smelled? etc.
Where he's jerking off, she could have asked him how it felt? Did it feel good? Did he want to cum yet? She could have had him slow down, and edged himself as a tease.
Too rushed.
Four stars -- for potential.