by xxxecil
cool, i'm the first to respond. excellent story!!! please finish
I loved this story. I'm usually too lazy to post comments, but I felt obligated to do so in this case. The scenario is a very imaginative, but what's even better is the way the author introduces the background information little by little in a non-linear way. Very well written, and I'm looking forward to reading other chapters.
Fascinating scenario, very well-written and has amazing potential. I hope you continue this
I can't wait to read what happens next to Ten Inch!
I hope he gets to freedom!
You have a great sense of ironic humour. Keep using it!
Although I must admit I would prefer it if you continued your oldest profession story, this excellent piece more than makes up for it, please continue.
I too am loving this story. hope you write more and continue your other series as well. keep up the good work.
Great story - keep on writing and see if the poor man can make his dreams come true.
Fresh and exciting. Erotic and fantastic. A good story with good sex.
And a good idea too!
Keep up the good work and I hope to read a sequel soon!
the plot of this story is rather ingenius. i really enjoyed it and hope you will write more.
An interesting take on what might happen after a genetic war. I must ask, why boob talk? Have most females mutated too far to use vocal cords?
I am interested to see where you decide to go with the story.
Interesting story. Saw some elements influenced by wheel of time series. Fantastic.
Please keep going with this.
This is one of my favourite stories along with "Enter the Amazon" and I'd love to see it finished.
Its awesome, your awesome, keep going!
I don't what got into your head when you thought you should stop writing this, but whatever it is, rip it out violently and BURN IT!! This is a MASTERPIECE! But you know what would work great? Two alternate storylines, one where he DOES give in, and one where he continues his journey! That'd be f***ing AWESOME!
Out of all xxxecil's stories, this is the one I would most like a sequel to.
This is a real piece of art, the story has the perfect blend of elements to keep a vibrant and charming vibe.
Very interesting premise. I would like for you to continue this if possible.
Love it so far. Interesting premise, just enough history to make it interesting. Loved the mutations of the females, and the fact that the danger in the story is about sex. Sex as a weapon, and means of enslavement.
Please continue...