All Comments on 'The Test'

of the species.

Enjoy if you admire it.

Not bad at all. I do hope for a continuation of the story though.

You writing was fairly good, however like many of the reviewers I will comment on your characters. (that in itself is a compliment to engage the readers emotions).

This asshole is not a Dom he is just an asshole with a power complex. He no more deserves to have a slave then the next door kid. Find someone you can respect, love or trust, not just fear.

this is obviously a work of fiction, if you look at the author's profile...

I think it's hot, and it's about punishment for christ's sake, so duh the dom is going to be violent.

fiction fiction fiction.

so hot I want to be her

the general idea is good I give you that.

She followed the rules as far as is even possible, but the guy still got mad as hell.

If you portray it that way, the story nedds more, to rectifiy the situation or even justify it, nothing wrong with a sad story, but this is just bad.

You make it sound as if it were right though, hope you don't think that way.