The Text Message

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lizkeigh
lizkeigh
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The texts were from months ago, from before Mark and Lauren had started dating. But Jesus Christ. And this is who she was talking to, downstairs.

But then, it came to him. Clear as day.

Mark left the bathroom and peered down the stairs. Steve was still there, but Lauren had wandered out by the pool, socializing with other office friends. That gave Mark the go-ahead.

On Steve's phone, he typed a new message to Lauren:

"amazing 2 see u tonight. hope this isn't too unwelcome but you look beautiful. care to meet for...you know...upstairs bathroom?"

Mark pushed Send. It occurred to him that this was the most pathetic, immature thing he'd ever done.

Mark settled back into a corner and gazed at the stairs unblinkingly, waiting.

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AnonymousAnonymous27 days ago

Are we ever getting a follow up on this story? The waiting is real on something that could have ended so well.

shadrachtshadracht9 months ago

Bad story with a build up showing that she's kind of a shit person who apparently didn't really have any real feelings for Mark, and no ending.

danoctoberdanoctoberover 3 years ago
Frustrating story.

The ending. There is none.

But if there was, it wouldn't end happily ever after. She has clearly expressed her true feelings. She enjoys the other guy much more.

What did she like about dating the poor sucker? He was funnier. That's all that she said. Pretty devastating truth to hear, but at least she was honest. There is no more story.

If there were a chapter 2, the boyfriend should be man enough to just walk. She's just not into him the way he is into her. Life sucks sometimes and this poor fellow needs to man up and move on.

Like the story. Wish there was more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
No ending

Poor story fuck you for not finishing

danoctoberdanoctoberover 5 years ago
Nice build up....

No conclusion. Shame.

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