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Click hereThe texts were from months ago, from before Mark and Lauren had started dating. But Jesus Christ. And this is who she was talking to, downstairs.
But then, it came to him. Clear as day.
Mark left the bathroom and peered down the stairs. Steve was still there, but Lauren had wandered out by the pool, socializing with other office friends. That gave Mark the go-ahead.
On Steve's phone, he typed a new message to Lauren:
"amazing 2 see u tonight. hope this isn't too unwelcome but you look beautiful. care to meet for...you know...upstairs bathroom?"
Mark pushed Send. It occurred to him that this was the most pathetic, immature thing he'd ever done.
Mark settled back into a corner and gazed at the stairs unblinkingly, waiting.
Are we ever getting a follow up on this story? The waiting is real on something that could have ended so well.
Bad story with a build up showing that she's kind of a shit person who apparently didn't really have any real feelings for Mark, and no ending.
The ending. There is none.
But if there was, it wouldn't end happily ever after. She has clearly expressed her true feelings. She enjoys the other guy much more.
What did she like about dating the poor sucker? He was funnier. That's all that she said. Pretty devastating truth to hear, but at least she was honest. There is no more story.
If there were a chapter 2, the boyfriend should be man enough to just walk. She's just not into him the way he is into her. Life sucks sometimes and this poor fellow needs to man up and move on.
Like the story. Wish there was more.
And then get the fuck off the site the most outrageously stupid monologue I've had the misfortune to have read and then to have no end asinine n
... one more paragraph and you'ld have have five. The ending is simple either he steps into a room across the hall leaving the door cracked open, a minute later she shows up looks around and texts back "where are you ?" or doesn't show up and just texts back "fuck you !". Not a hard write. The hard part was the realistic dialog at the begining. Great job of breathing life into the charactors through there words.
sometimes there is the need to walk away, and he should have done that ! The damage is complete and that will simply make it total and irrevesible. At least a clean break - somewhere.
I REALLY liked your story. I thought you captured the absolute parnoia of that kinda relationship perfectly. Mark wanted all the detail he could get even though it was eating him up to hear it. It was also an incredible turn on hearing her describe the relationship with Steve. I DEFINITELY want to know how this ends! Immediate 5 stars.