All Comments on 'The Thing about Libby Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story

Please hurry with more parts

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great start!

It's all out in the open and he loves it, so would I!! Please keep writing, this is super hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
What comes next?

Dirty and sweet! Looking forward to seeing what comes next!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wow!

This is great. I love your writing. Keep it coming. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
More?

I love the story but why is it taking so long for the next chapter? Hurry up, please?

charliebillcharliebillover 8 years ago
This got me hot and hard!

I would like to find my own Libby to give me the same treatment!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More?

This was good. I'd hate to see it unfinished. I see from your other postings that you're still around so i hope you can make time for this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Chapter 2 awaited

I've read this many times the description is so erotic, Libby is such a sexy, strong character.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Chapter 2 would be awesome as this was great!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Interesting premise.

But too one-sided. Nothing about any of her body parts. No pussy. No breasts (and they're still bra encased). Nothing with her ass. She doesn't orgasm. She doesn't play with her clit while ass fucking him.

No discussion about what he'd like to do to her if he had the chance.

No playing ith his cock and balls. No edging.

Four stars.

Anonymous
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